Oh, well, if communication is your goal, that’s something totally different.
Some of us - we know who we are - are in the wordiness business for the sheer joy of watching the syllables unspool across the screen until they reach their natural termination ... in a period.
I liked the style. It’s better than having to sort out misplaced modifiers all thrown at the end of a sentence (or wandering aimlessly throughout the paragraphs).