[Jemian]

I hope I get better than a "C+".

If you like, a special offer to you only, you can submit it to me, a former 6th grade teacher, and I and my hubby, a current Language Arts teacher and my daughter, also a Freeper and an English major at Auburn, will be happy to critique it for you and assign a grade.

I'm just trying to be helpful.

Merry Christmas!

[allmost]

U put the X in Xmas:)

[Graybeard58]

All those creds and you don’t know that “critique” is a noun?