[Darksheare]

oops.
Sorry about lowering your goosebump threshold.
As a side note, I sometimes write other kinds of fiction.
Fantasy style stories, or just plain macabre.
Like the one about a guy whose whole life is stalked by death, and death appears to him as a pale-ish lady.
Still polishing that one up a bit.

[Rushmore Rocks]

You write well. Is the "pale-ish lady" riding a horse?