[2timothy3.16]

Your version makes heaven a "members only" exclusive country club for Christians. I don't see how that is an improvement.

Yup, Saved only, Born Again Only, and as for your not seeing it as an improvement, well, Jesus says in John 3:3 that unless you are Born Again you will not see heaven, so I guess I'll go with Him and not worry about what you fail to see as an imporvement.

[Alouette]

Jesus says in John 3:3

I care what's written in John 3:3 about as much as you care what's written in the Koran.