[Mudboy Slim]

"America’s bubble"

I like the poem, but believe the ending is unworthy...America's Greatness is not a bubble, but more of a Manifest Destiny, a veritable juggernaut!!

How 'bout gettin' them LeftistMinnows to try and burst America's juggernaut?!!

FReegards...MUD

[poet]

The "bubble" is not to be taken literally. I am referring to the "American Dream" and what America stands for.

Simply a metaphor, my friend, evidently a bad metaphor. I appreciate your critique' and I am of the opinion that if my writings are not clear, then I have the responsiblity to make changes.


FReegards