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To: Mudboy Slim

"My FRiend, please post something inspirational...MUD"

I hope this fits the bill, Mud:

These Four Things

When you accept Christ,
you are born anew,
all past sins and strife are
are lifted from you

You become a child of Christ
with a new life to enjoy,
you cannot be caught
by evil’s ploy

A new hope is yours
a new home awaits,
opening new doors
to Heaven’s gate

He invites all to enter,
rejecting none who do so,
you become the center
with a new way to go,

Your Soul and Spirit sings
with these four things,
never again to know sorrow,
rejoicing in every tomorrow

Copyright © 1999 By John J. Lindsay. All Rights Reserved
March 29, 1999
444 posted on 10/15/2002 5:47:58 PM PDT by poet
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To: Mudboy Slim
Too many "are"s in stanza one. Stanza should read:

all past sins and strife
are lifted from you

The "senior moments" are coming closer and closer together 8>)

445 posted on 10/15/2002 5:55:24 PM PDT by poet
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To: poet
"A new hope is yours
a new home awaits,
opening new doors
to Heaven’s gate

He invites all to enter,
rejecting none who do so,
you become the center
with a new way to go..."

El perfecto, mi hermano...MUD

464 posted on 10/16/2002 9:35:31 AM PDT by Mudboy Slim
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