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To: Jeff Head

I liked the scene but I will be freep mailing some comments regarding some points I noticed.

Stay well - Stay safe - Stay armed - Yorktown

33 posted on 03/11/2002 10:44:17 AM PST by harpseal

To: harpseal

Got it. Will reply later this evening on FRemail. Thanks for the pointers and the corrections on some of the typos.

Best regards to you my friend.

49 posted on 03/12/2002 1:46:32 PM PST by Jeff Head

To: harpseal

Got the fixes and suggestions. Thanks!

Will have a corrected and updated version on my site tomorrow.

65 posted on 03/12/2002 9:09:32 PM PST by Jeff Head

To: harpseal; sneakypete; Travis McGee; Dukie; Joanie-f; Lurker; Luis Gonzalez

For those so interested, I have updated the excerpt a good bit based on feedback. Here's the location:

70 posted on 03/13/2002 8:20:31 AM PST by Jeff Head

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