Seriously, though, a solid chapter, though I had a hard time visualizing just where the HUM-V was, and thus how the firefight went...but that's just my short attention span at work, I'm afraid. And you didn't overdo the gore, but kept it realistic (and the little shout-outs to the mil-types and gun afficionados are nice, too). I'd like to read the rest, that's for sure.