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To: MindBender26
By the way, the correct grammar for the sentence is

Larry Parks's day in court didn't suck as much as it could have.

31 posted on 01/08/2002 6:41:07 AM PST by Dog Gone
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To: Dog Gone
Incorrect: Larry Parks's day in court didn't suck as much as it could have.

Correct: Although Larry Parks was convicted of 15 counts of child molestation, axe murder, and jaywalking, he was entitled to parole because he had an unhappy childhood.

Better?

51 posted on 01/08/2002 7:02:34 AM PST by Billthedrill
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