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To: Tax-chick
n your climatic paragraph, where you’ve linked the reports of various recent mass shootings, I think you need a stronger applause-line than, “Obama goes to guns.” “Goes” is a lousy verb.

Actually, this is a particular phrase where I would invoke Author's Privilege. I like this phrase. It has cadence. Goes/Guns. I feel it is one of the standout phrases. If you were the editor and I was the website author, I'd overrule you on this one, or attempt to. :)

61 posted on 07/24/2016 2:58:43 PM PDT by Lazamataz (Islamics kill people because they are sick of being called violent! They are tired of Islamophobia!)
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To: Lazamataz

Okay. It does have alliteration.


62 posted on 07/24/2016 2:59:21 PM PDT by Tax-chick ("How sad for civilization." ~ hal ogen)
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To: Lazamataz

And now I’m going to the pool.


64 posted on 07/24/2016 3:00:51 PM PDT by Tax-chick ("How sad for civilization." ~ hal ogen)
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