[Tax-chick]

As always, your points are excellent. The sentences tend to be very convoluted, and you’ve gone overboard with the adverbs. Remember, if you use strong verbs, you don’t need adverbs!

[Lazamataz]

As always, your points are excellent. The sentences tend to be very convoluted, and you’ve gone overboard with the adverbs.

Dammit. I *knew* I was excessively, imprudently, lavishly intemperate and overindulgently unrestrained with my elocution, in an extravagently, unreasonably superfluous, and extremely disproportionate manner.

[Lazamataz]

The sentences tend to be very convoluted, and you’ve gone overboard with the adverbs.

In retrospect, you are right. I need to structure up sentence my tighten.