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To: Din Maker

The “You” is a problem. It would have been more readable and understandable had you “the writer” been more descriptive instead of over-using the ambiguous “you”.

I would have liked to have known more about your issue, except I found it too difficult to read, as well.


39 posted on 10/11/2014 7:24:31 AM PDT by X-spurt (CRUZ missile - armed and ready.)
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To: X-spurt

I found it too difficult to read, as well.
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OMG.... Are you a product of the Detroit, MI Public School System? (LQTM)


43 posted on 10/11/2014 7:27:54 AM PDT by Din Maker (I've always been crazy, but, that's the only thing that's kept me from going insane.)
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