[expat2]

Well, you have a point; the first 8 lines are in sonnet form, tho’ the last six don’t fit that form. But it’s well done, anyway.

[struggle]

>>Well, you have a point; the first 8 lines are in sonnet form, tho’ the last six don’t fit that form. But it’s well done, anyway.

Yeah, I just noticed that the final sestet has two and not three linking end rhymes. Oh well, that’s what beer will do to you.

No, wait, if Spenser can have his own type of sonnet, so can I. its a STRUGGLARIAN Sonnet.