I’ll read comments from anyone on this. I was also hoping for comments on those more knowledgeable about legal process than I am.
Having said that, beyond a few things like typos and poor word choice I would say it was pretty concise.
I don't think it'll change much, but who knows. I expect the response will be that the things she mentioned would be considered in the review process and that she will be notified later on the conclusion reached.
I'm not a lawyer and have never played one on TV either so your mileage may vary.
I did rather like her asking about how Malihi could use Ankeny when it was never presented.