This is great work, but my only critique would be to add a good summary intro paragraph — the good old “who, what, when, where and why.” This will draw readers into the details which you have spelled out nicely. Remember, on the web, people tend to skim, so the more you can chunk it up, create bulleted lists of info, the easier it will be to scan. Let’s make your work as effective as possible!
I’m open to anything that will help get this in front of more voters. I can write a summary, but I doubt JR/mods will allow me to update the article. I’d probably have to re-post it.