All I have said to you, and I have said it over and over and over, is Either use your own words, be brief and succinct and make yourself clear, or don't bother.
I think I make myself quite clear. In fact, I think it's a mark of poor writing to be unintelligible, and a mark of immaturity to name-drop, revert to in-group lingo and inside jokes, and to take pride in being incomprehensible. If you cannot make yourself clear to me, it is your failure. What you decide to do about it is, of course, up to you.
Two realities. Get it?
Whose fault is that?