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To: machogirl

In my original piece I mentioned all the nicknames, but when I gave it a look over, the names made it drag. They were repetitive, and they didn’t help the flow of a piece I already thought, if I’m honest, was a little stuttered.

Hope that helps.


766 posted on 07/12/2009 11:56:10 AM PDT by ChrisParry
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To: ChrisParry
In my original piece I mentioned all the nicknames, but when I gave it a look over, the names made it drag. They were repetitive, and they didn't’t help the flow of a piece I already thought, if I’m honest, was a little stuttered.Hope that helps.

No it doesn't. It sounds like your a desperate liar.

784 posted on 07/12/2009 11:59:06 AM PDT by ladyvet (WOLVERINES!!!!!)
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To: ChrisParry
In my original piece I mentioned all the nicknames, but when I gave it a look over, the names made it drag.

But you still have them, of course?

I mean, you ARE a "journalist," right, LOL?

796 posted on 07/12/2009 12:04:00 PM PDT by Trailerpark Badass (Happiness is a choice!)
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To: ChrisParry

I appreciate your response, however if you had included the names Freepers could research the posters.

I haven’t read of any Freeper who has come out and admitted they posted the vile posts.

I would like to know who they are.


812 posted on 07/12/2009 12:06:04 PM PDT by machogirl (If Obama's handing out Pie, I like Lemon Meringue.)
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