To: wastedyears
The sea crashes on to the rocky beach, with the marbled sand black and white, looking like paradise with the sound of norteño music lingering in the background, but this view is violently interrupted by a metallic wall, penetrating the sea, salted water responding to the aggression by corroding the metal sheets. I'd give it a B- in a College Freshman English course.
3 posted on
08/17/2008 9:38:30 AM PDT by
Ukiapah Heep
(Shoes for Industry!)
To: Ukiapah Heep
I'd give it a B- in a College Freshman English course. ["...salted water responding to the aggression by corroding the metal sheets."]???
C- at best.
7 posted on
08/17/2008 9:50:41 AM PDT by
Mad_Tom_Rackham
("The land of the Free...Because of the Brave")
To: Ukiapah Heep
The sea crashes on to the rocky beach, with the marbled sand black and white, looking like paradise with the sound of norteño music lingering in the background, but this view is violently interrupted by a metallic wall, penetrating the sea, salted water responding to the aggression by corroding the metal sheets. I'd give it a B- in a College Freshman English course.
I'd give it a C or C-. In fact, I think that I'd rank it close to "It was a dark and stormy night." :=)
9 posted on
08/17/2008 9:54:00 AM PDT by
Bob
To: Ukiapah Heep
I'd give it a B- in a College Freshman English course.I'd give a D in a Journalism course whenever you have to read four paragraphs of absolute drivel before getting anywhere near the point.
15 posted on
08/17/2008 10:15:57 AM PDT by
Albion Wilde
(Alaska has the oil. The Senate has the dipsticks.)
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