[Corin Stormhands]

FWIW, the first two aren’t as well written, she doesn’t really get into her stride until Prisoner of Azkaban.

I hadn't realized how much she improved until I went back to re-read the series from the beginning. I finished Sorceror's Stone last week and am almost through Chamber of Secrets (I had a weekend diversion that kept me from reading).

But you're right. POA is where the writing really improves.

[PetroniusMaximus]

“I hadn’t realized how much she improved until I went back to re-read...”

Probably when the “ghost” writer came onboard.

Whaaaa, haaa, haaa, haaa!!!!!

:)