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1 posted on 11/15/2006 4:45:08 AM PST by kriztine rosales-viray
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2 posted on 11/15/2006 5:26:09 AM PST by Matchett-PI (To have no voice in the Party that always sides with America's enemies is a badge of honor.)
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To: kriztine rosales-viray
Good grief! Not another inane, miserably-formatted, incomprehensible, sophomoric, "academic" vanity! Why must you inflict these smears of drivel on this conservative forum?

(I can only assume you publish seeking criticism. Well, you are certainly going to get it here...)

3 posted on 11/15/2006 5:40:09 AM PST by TXnMA ("Allah": Satan's current alias...)
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Thank you for reminding us why Universities suck.


5 posted on 11/15/2006 5:56:05 AM PST by Valpal1 (Big Media is like Barney Fife with a gun.)
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To: kriztine rosales-viray

I think you have some issues with coherent writing, probably because of a misspent youth. As a contribution to your essay, I'll give it a quick edit. My edits in parenthesis.

("This paper tries" is used in consecutive sentences in your opening paragraph--Repetitive)

(The)Social Construction of Reality (theory, argument,)of Berger and Luckmann is (not)concerned (delete not) with any (form of? theoretical?--delete kind of) of knowledge being discussed in epistemology
(this sentence becomes a run-on sentence here and goes downhill quickly since the second 'is' in the sentence doesn't relate clearly to any noun. I'd suggest breaking this up into separate sentences for clarity)
(delete- but with)(Instead,) the knowledge of everyday life, as understood by Berger and Luckmann, is the kind of knowledge which enables us to know where we are, what we are doing, who we are, where we are going, how we are going to get there, what time it is, etc.

(The paragraph break in long passages to indicate different ideas is your friend. Learn to use it)

"Contemporaries are those whom merely by hearsay." (Whom what--merely by hearsay?)

(I really don't have time for more, but I truly hope you will someday achieve the knowledge that will enable you to know where you are, what you are doing, who you are, where you are going, how you are going to get there, and what time it is. Meanwhile you need an editor or a professor who believes in grade inflation)


6 posted on 11/15/2006 6:40:15 AM PST by wildbill
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To: kriztine rosales-viray
Kriztine is busy today.

Is Kriztine posting her mid-term papers here in hope of a wider audience?

If so, Kriztine should seek another college or University, one that places a higher value on coherent thought processes.

OTOH, if Kriztine is in a political science or any "social" major track - she is right at home and is clearly getting her moneys worth.
7 posted on 11/15/2006 9:06:29 AM PST by ASOC (The phrase "What if" or "If only" are for children.)
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Klaus Krippendorf needs to learn how to make paragraphs.


8 posted on 11/15/2006 1:31:56 PM PST by shuckmaster (An oak tree is an acorns way of making more acorns)
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