I like Clancy. The story line is interesting, but the switching headshots when the dialog switches talkers got obnoxious.
"Hello?" (headshot of Jack saying hello)
"Yes, this is Joe the telemarketer..." (switch to Joe)
"No, I don't own my own house." (switch to Jack, showing his grimace)
"Sir, we aren't sellinghome improvements..."(switch to Joe, showing the puzzled look)
"And I don't want to switch phone companies." (switch to show Jack's frustration)
"Sir, we aren't with the phone company..."(switch to show Joe's same puzzled look)
"Look! I'M NOT INTERESTED!"(switch to show Jack loading a cartridge into the chamber of his pistol)
"But, with Comcast Cable..." (switch to show Jack behind Joe) BANG!
Excellent parody, LOL....For me it's the surprises that happen in the multiple shots, like when Edgar dies or a character "flips" or a shooting you didn't expect, that the "shock and awe" for me of 24 is. Still, likes and dislikes, are like Rush says, purely personal.
Submit that to the 24 producers. Maybe they'll make a blooper reel. LOL