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To: hummingbird

This is one of mine:

They creep in the shadows on the deck. The faint squelching sounds drowned out by the sounds of wind and wave. Closer they glide, leaving damp trails behind, like an arrow pointing to the heart of the ship.

The captian stared in fasciation at the compass needle's slow even counter-clockwise spin.

He felt a chill as he suddenly realized where ded reckoning said they were.

That chill masked the very real drop in temperature that oozed from the dark shapeless thing approaching his back...


322 posted on 03/08/2006 10:44:29 AM PST by null and void (I nominate Sept 11th: "National Moderate Muslim Day of Tacit Approval". - Mr. Rational, paraphrased)
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To: null and void
Awesome...LOL! I feel like I've been called out now!

Next time I "throw my back" and they give me the pretty, happy pills, maybe I can write the next paragraph or so of your great, American novel-in-the-making.
487 posted on 03/08/2006 5:29:28 PM PST by hummingbird
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