I didn't see it, just reading the text.
Sounds like the jokes could have been left out or either better jokes used.
(Why slightly ridicule your parents and grandparents?)
I can't stand all the pandering to young people's expectations of "cool."
Otherwise their comments seemed ok.
I never could stand that, even when I was young and loved to have fun (and still do).
It's an attitude we had to endure during the eight years of the immature, superficial, corrupt Clinton administration.