Only two substantive suggestions.
1. I would have left Betty Currie and her race out of it.
2. I would have added Tom Daschle's wife to the airline industry contribution paragraph.
Thanks for the comments. The Betty Currie story was put in as an unstated contrast to the current administration and to demonstrate how Clinton abused his White House staff, making them complicit in his schemes.
If you have specific information on Linda Daschle activities (beyond her being a lobbyist for the airline industries) that helped make the airliners vulnerable to the Sept. 11 attacks, let me know.