[Skooz]

As a third rate, hack, amateur poet, I must respectfully disagree.

The flow of the lyrics is superb, like pouring water from a jar. It is pleasing to hear as well as read. It is anything but stilted, and certainly not forced.

It's actually quite good.

[AmishDude]

Better lyrics than the Steve Miller band. I may not be the walrus, but I know bad poetry when I read it.