[ClancyJ]

Very good Anthem. I like the eagle and the hunt. How about ending with the Bush statement - We will not tire, we will not falter and we will not fail?

[Anthem]

I like that. Bush's own voice could come in there at the end. Maybe punctuated by an eagles territorial scream.

Problem is that it already reads long for a 1 minute clip. I get 1:05-1:10, and actually 1:20 if I put in the pauses that I want to for emphasis. I guess it depends on whether it's edited for a 1 minute commercial or a more relaxed longer video clip for delivery in email.