1 posted on
06/28/2003 9:00:14 AM PDT by
Jeff Head
To: joanie-f; Dukie; JohnHuang2; k.trujillo; Travis McGee; Critter; Lurker; harpseal; sneakypete; ...
For those who have been following the series, here's the 1st excerpt from Volume IV. I believe most folks will recognize the fictional parallel to events of 1999-2000.
Best Fregards.
Jeff
2 posted on
06/28/2003 9:02:33 AM PDT by
Jeff Head
To: Luis Gonzalez; JohnHuang2
I believe you gentlemen will appreciate and like this excerpt.
7 posted on
06/28/2003 9:25:42 AM PDT by
Jeff Head
To: Jeff Head
MAC-10
dumb choice imo
9 posted on
06/28/2003 9:43:58 AM PDT by
joesnuffy
(Moderate Islam Is For Dilettantes)
To: archy; wardaddy; Eaker
FYI...latest excerpt from my series, this one is the 1st from Volume IV, which is in work and scheduled for publication in November.
To: Jeff Head
Bump for later read.
40 posted on
06/28/2003 2:02:33 PM PDT by
Rebelbase
(........The bartender yells, "hey get out of here, we don't serve breakfast!")
To: Jeff Head
Jeff
Thanks for the great read. I'm sending out the link to my friends now.
44 posted on
06/28/2003 11:25:15 PM PDT by
Badray
(Molon Labe!)
To: Jeff Head
bump
To: Jeff Head
bump
To: Jeff Head
Only idiots who've watched too many movies use the MAC-10--it is a POS.
50 posted on
06/30/2003 8:44:40 AM PDT by
Poohbah
(I must be all here, because I'm not all there!)
To: Travis McGee; harpseal
Just thought I'd ping you two and ask what you thought of the revisions I made to this excerpt that are now in the manuscript and on the web site
HERE.
Basically I changed the weapons from MAC-10 to MP5's and made the team a SFOD-D (Delta) team who train at a remote area of Eglin instead of Rangers training in Georgia. This was per some freeper input resulting from the thread.
Jeff
To: Jeff Head
Well my critisism would be the choice of the Mac-10. Not a military weapon, poor accuracy and a very unlikely application in 2009. Even the Colt M-4 which is standard military issue currently will likely be phased out by them. But I'm a gun nut so I pick up on these little things. A good tale none the less.
To: Jeff Head
Here's a big BUMP for a terrific FReeper AND author.
61 posted on
06/30/2003 2:53:45 PM PDT by
Magnolia
To: Jeff Head
BUMP (Wow!)
64 posted on
06/30/2003 3:00:33 PM PDT by
Saundra Duffy
(For victory & freedom!!!)
To: Jeff Head
So, when does volume 4 go on sale?
Waiting on pins and needles.
Let my brother and bro-in-law read the first two volumes.
They are starting to see some things happening internationally that they don't like.
67 posted on
06/30/2003 6:53:55 PM PDT by
Just another Joe
(FReeping can be addictive and helpful to your mental health)
To: meadsjn
FYI,...your review of Volume III just came up on the Amazon site
HERE Thanks again for such kind words and your support and faith in this project.
This excerpt for Volume IV has changed somewhat since I posted it here on FR. If you are interested in those changes, you can read it on the main site HERE
To: Jeff Head
bttt
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