As I look at the body count for both sides, apparently you are absolutely correct!!!
I wouldn't get in a big hurry to ruin this record.
I think at least one of those factors, superior air power, is a rather large factor to ignore in an analysis of this type. Any reference to the USN is also missing. I have zero ground force experience and no way of judging that aspect, but it seems to me this paper is essentially pointless.
Strictly from an analytical viewpoint.
Purely from experiencing a dark time in the DOD, the Carter years, I am aware that the military, including the highest brass, raised making things work with what you actually have at hand, to an art form.
I think General Franks has the situation in hand.