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THE RAID: New Fiction from the War On Domestic Terrorism
www.sit-rep.com ^ | February 24, 2002 | Travis McGee

Posted on 02/26/2002 12:59:26 PM PST by Travis McGee

THE RAID

Fifteen year old Danny Edmonds was at his desk hunched over his computer keyboard clicking and typing furiously when his father came into his bedroom.

"Danny, do you know what time it is?"

"Uh, hi Dad, let's see, zero one hundred hours."

"Affirmative. Time for lights out son."

"But Dad, it's Saturday night!"

"So what's the war tonight?"

"Stalingrad."

"Which side are you?"

"I'm Russian this time."

"So what time zone is Field Marshal Von Paulus in? Maybe it's not one am in his bunker."

"Actually, his bio claims he's an Army major at Fort Campbell, so it would be midnight his time. And I'm kicking his butt clear back to the Ukraine."

"One more hour then, until two am, that's it. Tell the Field Marshal that General Zhukov's father ordered him to go to bed by then."

"Oh Dad, give me a break, he doesn't know I'm a kid." Danny's voice cracked, half way between boyhood and manliness.

"So you're whipping an active duty Army major in tactics?"

"Strategy Dad, strategy. It's corps level warfare."

"Right. Pardon me. And you still want to enlist in the Marines in three years?"

"Two Dad, two years."

"You know I won't sign for you at seventeen. Three years and you'll be on your own, free to make your own mistakes."

"Dad, I'll still be an officer, but a mustang officer! The greatest Marine officers are mustangs, prior enlisted."

It was an ongoing contest of wills between them. Burgess Edmonds could get Danny an appointment to Annapolis or West Point with one or two phone calls, but at fifteen Danny was determined to enlist in the Marines "ASAP" and get into the action as a "mud Marine" in the war.

Danny's room told the story. Where other fifteen year old boys had posters on their walls of rock groups and basketball stars, Danny had seemingly every Marine recruiting poster ever made. He had a camouflage poncho liner for a bed spread, he wore Marine combat boots to school to toughen his feet, and sitting at his desk he was wearing bright red USMC sweats, with the gold "globe and anchor" on the front and the Marine mascot bulldog on the back.

Danny was only fifteen, and Burgess had no complaints about him, not really. Danny was carrying a 3.9 GPA at Saint Paul's while lettering in wrestling and lacrosse and would have his choice of colleges, his father just hoped that his son would come around and see the benefits of accepting an appointment to a service academy after high school instead of enlisting. Danny was afraid the war would be over before he could get into it if he waited four more years: Burgess Edmonds did not share that belief, or any eagerness for his only son to experience combat. Anyway, he knew better than to push the issue. Danny and 21 year old Valerie were his "second family", and this time he was not going to blow it like he had the first time around. Maybe he'd mellowed, or maybe he'd just learned not to push them too hard.

"Okay Danny, whenever and however you do get your commission, you'll be the greatest officer the Marines ever had. Two am, all right bud?"

"All right Dad."

Burgess Edmonds turned to the hallway before Danny could see the tears welling up in his eyes. Then he slipped down the hall to Valerie's room, Valerie who was spending the weekend down from college, his little girl Valerie who had so quickly become a grown woman. Her door was slightly open, so he looked in and watched her sleeping under her quilted comforter, her golden hair spilled across her face and pillow. Where had his little girl gone, the little girl he had tucked in among teddie bears what seemed like only last week?

He went back downstairs. His wife Glennis, his second wife, was already long asleep in their bedroom at the other end of the second floor hallway from the kids' rooms.

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George Hummel was in the shotgun seat of the lead vehicle in the "Special Training Unit" raiding convoy, a black Chevy Suburban SUV with black tinted windows. It was parked on the shoulder of a dead end county service road under a covering of oak trees a mile from the Edmonds' driveway. Next to him in the driver's seat was STU "Gold Team" leader Tim Jaeger, the ex SEAL officer. Behind them in the back of the truck six more STU team members were sitting on the carpeted cargo deck: the seats had been removed for the operation to give them more room and allow faster exiting. Nearly all of them had prior service overseas with military specops units: the stripped out Suburban was just a "low flying helo" taking them to their latest battle zone as far as they were concerned. They were all wearing black tactical gear, with black kevlar helmets, black balaclava face masks, black gloves, black boots, even black Heckler and Koch MP-5 submachineguns.

Three more black Chevy Suburbans were lined up behind them. Tonight the STU Gold Team was the lead element and was taking down the house, the Blue Team was providing the snipers, the recon team, and the perimeter security. STU team on-site commander Bob Beaufort in the trailing Suburban was not masked or helmeted and was remaining at the bottom of the driveway, he would "badge" any local law enforcement which might arrive unexpectedly with his fake FBI credentials. Nothing on the STU team tonight would connect them with the BATF. This was the first time in his long career that Beaufort had carried FBI creds, the irony was delicious after years of being the subject of FBI jokes and put downs.

They all sat silent as death, watching the subdued lighting of the various screens in the front between the leaders, straining to hear their radio earphones which were turned down to a barely audible hiss. The snipers and the recon team had gone out hours before the raiding party had arrived at the forward staging area, dropped off by the STU's phoney "VEPCO" Virginia electric power van, which was now hidden nearby serving as a commo relay and electronic support unit. The "VEPCO" van was already monitoring the house's telephones and electrical usage, and would cut the phones and the ADT alarm system off just before the raid. Unknown to the Edmonds, two of their cell phones were now remotely turned on, providing the STU with audio listening devices paid for and placed in position by the Edmonds themselves.

The two man sniper teams and the recon team carried advanced 3rd generation night vision rifle scopes, thermal imagers, electronic "big ears", and "field detectors". If the Edmonds had infrared or microwave or other alarm systems on their property, then recon team "Romeo" would find and neutralize them before the raiding convoy arrived. The sniper teams with their night scopes and thermal imagers were in position to cover the flanks of the Edmonds 100 acre property, as well as the rear of the house towards the bluffs and the river.

The radio crackled in Hummel's ear, all thirty STU team men heard the report at the same time. "Gold leader, Romeo, all clear, condition zebra zebra, hush puppy."

Zebra zebra was a STU brevity code slang for "z's", meaning a sleeping house. The BATF and other federal law enforcement special response teams preferred to raid in the early hours when people were most deeply asleep. This was safest for everyone, providing the maximum shock for their "speed, surprise, and violence of action". This caused people to quit before they even had the first idea of resisting.

"Hush puppy" meant that the recon team had taken care of the Edmonds' dogs with sound suppressed weapons....

Gold Team leader Jaeger then checked his sniper teams, code named "Daniel Boone" and "Davy Crockett".

"Delta Bravo, Gold leader, sitrep."

"Gold leader, Delta Bravo ready."

"Gold leader, Delta Charlie ready."

"Gold Two ready?"

"Ready" came from the Suburban behind Hummel and Jaeger. Blue Leader and Blue Two reported in immediately after that.

Gold Leader Tim Jaeger flipped his helmet mounted night vision goggles down over his eyes. All four vehicles' engines were turned on. Jaeger hit the gas and all four blacked out vehicles ran up the service road to the county road in tight formation, fast but silent with their oversized custom mufflers. They'd all studied aerial photos of the Edmonds estate taken earlier that day from the newly acquired STU helicopter, they knew exactly where the snipers and the recon team were, they knew exactly where to park and jump out, they knew the locations of the doors and windows and who was assigned to each.

It was 2:45 am, and the STU team was conducting its first "real world" operation. They were primed, cocked, and coursing with adrenaline and testosterone. Payback for the Baltimore Massacre, and the Reston Virginia ambush of the FBI team, and the assassination of Senator Rodman and Sanderson was starting in one minute. They had all been briefed that Burgess Edmonds was the leader and financial kingpin of a shadowy right wing terrorist organization loosely hidden behind the cover of a rural hunting club in southeastern Virginia, an organization responsible for the past weeks' acts of domestic terrorism. And they all believed it: all except for Hummel in the lead Suburban, and Wally Malone, the founder of the Special Training Unit of the BATF, who was up overhead in the helicopter.

The Rest of the Story


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To: Travis McGee
I remember that happening. The sad thing is that if you tell this to the average "'murikan" they won't believe you.
101 posted on 02/27/2002 9:06:17 AM PST by sneakypete
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To: MileHi
The USSS thinks so too, and carry them in case they are pinned in a corner.
102 posted on 02/27/2002 9:13:42 AM PST by Travis McGee
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To: Dukie
Well I am putting this all "on the record": I have kids I want to see grow up and have kids, and I am in great health, I don't smoke, I barely drink, I run 4 miles under 30 minutes, and my grandparents lived well into their 80s or beyond.
103 posted on 02/27/2002 9:17:04 AM PST by Travis McGee
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To: sneakypete
Because of the internet, a small % do know about these "suicides" and etc, but not enough to sway the sheeple who get their ration of news from ABCNNBCBS (if they get any news at all).

This is setting up a huge divide in this country, because the informed will NOT "get with the program" when and if these type events come to pass. The sheeple in the majority will demand that the govt crack down hard, and the thing may take off on its own as it does in my novel.

104 posted on 02/27/2002 9:21:04 AM PST by Travis McGee
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To: Travis McGee
Dang....i figured an ex-SEAL named Jaeger (my fav ol timey frontloader) might be one to get cold feet about butchering civvies. Glad to hear the old SF guys will be part of the real cavalry!!!

This is really exciting. I think you need Judith Regan....babe for her age no doubt and leans our way.

105 posted on 02/27/2002 9:24:15 AM PST by wardaddy
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To: wardaddy,sneakypete
Now remember, only Hummel (who is "in" on Malone's sinster plot) saw the girl in the closet.

The others killed were "resisting with firearms", (Mom and Danny), so no twinge of guilt there. Danny even killed one STU troop.

Yes, some old green berets are part of "the cavalry".

They don't forget "De Oppresso Libere".

Who is Judith Regan?

106 posted on 02/27/2002 9:35:03 AM PST by Travis McGee
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To: Travis McGee
It happened in Taft, CA in October of 1998, near Bakersfield. The gun dealer's name was Darryl Howell.

Taft Gundelaer Dead in BATF Raid

From that article on my web site:

Disbelief permeated the tight-knit communities of Taft and Ford City Thursday as residents and friends of Darryl Howell questioned law enforcement's account of his death in his gun shop.

The Kern County Sheriff Department's version of the events — that the gun shop owner grabbed a loaded .45-caliber handgun Wednesday, struggled with officers and then placed the barrel in his mouth and pulled the trigger —just didn't fit with what they knew of the father of two.

Sheriff's officials said a Taft police officer, not knowing where the expended round went, immediately fired three rounds that struck Howell, 45, on the right side of his body. He died at the scene.

"Everyone in Taft knows this is stupid," said Shannon Ong, 34, Howell's niece. "They think the police officers are trying to make it seem like he was a criminal."

Ong believes there could be nothing further from the truth — that the man who grew up in Taft and graduated from Taft Union High School where yearbooks say he played football and was in the band was a wonderful man who ran an upstanding business ...


107 posted on 02/27/2002 9:40:35 AM PST by Jeff Head
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To: sneakypete
See post 107. Taft, CA near Bakersfield, October 1998.
108 posted on 02/27/2002 9:41:16 AM PST by Jeff Head
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To: Travis McGee
Who is Judith Regan ?

NY publishing exec - not sure which is her firm. Has / or maybe had a show on FoxNews intervewing authors.

109 posted on 02/27/2002 9:42:06 AM PST by Dukie
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To: Travis McGee
She's a book publisher who's backed by Murdoch and has an interview show on FOX....weekends usually. She's published (Regan Books) Rush, Marchinko, Bork, as well as a fair number of liberals and non political stuff. She's very very good at hyping books and distributing and she's obviously somewhat conservative politically yet still quite accessible. Conservative publishers aside from Palladin are pretty few and far between. ....books are like movies..(entertainment and validity aside)..they need distribution and hype. You've got a nice footing here on this forum withn 60k members for starters.
110 posted on 02/27/2002 10:10:52 AM PST by wardaddy
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To: Travis McGee
Let me be totally clear on this when this book is published I not only want to buy a copy I want to be able to get it autographed from the author. hopefully without having to stand in one of those damned lines at a Barnes & Noble.

Sttay well - stay safe- Stay armed - yorktown

111 posted on 02/27/2002 10:11:20 AM PST by harpseal
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To: Badray
Thank you very much.
112 posted on 02/27/2002 10:29:09 AM PST by Victoria Delsoul
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To: Victoria Delsoul
"Thank you very much."

No, Thank you.

113 posted on 02/27/2002 10:43:36 AM PST by Badray
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To: Travis McGee, All
Folks, TM's FIST Teams mentioned in his writings are not too far from reality. Here in Tennessee, we suffer from the "Click-it or Ticket" programs...

Law enforcement officers working outside of their jurisdictions with one or two officers that are withing their jurisdiction set up a road block in the name of "Seat belt enforcement." Now we have the officer's "reasonable suspecion" that can come into play:

"What can I say I suspect (that will hold up in court) that will allow me to search this vehicle?"

I HOPE EVERYONE CAN SEE TO WHERE THIS SORT OF THING WILL LEAD...

TM, you may remember me relating my story of my "Click-it or Ticket" incident in a thread last July... You mentioned your old WWII vet in that thread... I'll say it about as plain as I can. If it happens to me again, I'll say "Yes, Sir" and "No, Sir" and will be as cooperative as I can... But at the same time I will be memorizing the names of every officer there. If I, or any member of my group is targeted in one of these little fishing expeditions, there will be retribution. Somewhere, sometime ago, someone decided that revenge was best when it was sought immediately... That generally tends to end up with the party taking revenge also being buried. An empty victory... A well planned op, with all extracted and no W/KIAs is much better. Always believe in living to spend it...

OUTSTANDING WORK, TM!!! LOOK FORWARD TO PURCHASING SEVERAL COPIES (I expect them to be signed, you know.) I have several friends that enjoy a good read such as what I have sampled so far...

1/75 HUUAAAH!!

114 posted on 02/27/2002 10:47:32 AM PST by Raven6
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To: Travis McGee
Enjoyable writing, but is it fiction of non-fiction?
115 posted on 02/27/2002 11:01:29 AM PST by from occupied ga
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To: Raven6
I've been stopped by our city police twice in the last year checking for licenses and proof of insurance. Who pays for this? Five cops! Three vehicles!

The Hen went on a rampage!

I cornered the Mayor and demanded to know why they were doing this. Who ordered it? I thought he believed as I do that law abiding citizens should be left alone!

To his credit, he immediately called the Chief of Police while I waited. We found out that the reason we have these checks is because of CLINTON'S COPS PROGRAM, the program that we were told would put 100,000 extra cops out on the street. It turns out that in order for communities to receive their grant money, they must earn points. My city has traffic stops because the COPS program demands them.

I hope there's a unique level of Hell for our former President.

116 posted on 02/27/2002 11:26:11 AM PST by The Game Hen
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To: Jeff Head
Was it BATF or local LEOs?
117 posted on 02/27/2002 12:01:26 PM PST by Travis McGee
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To: Dukie,Poised Woman
Thanks. I am looking at them all, but it seems like St. Martin's Press and Regnery are the most "conservative friendly". Accurate Press, which published UC, is also a possibility.
118 posted on 02/27/2002 12:08:58 PM PST by Travis McGee
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To: wardaddy
Thanks for the tip! Everything I have learned tells me that publishing is much harder than writing.
119 posted on 02/27/2002 12:12:26 PM PST by Travis McGee
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To: harpseal
Hell I'll fly out there and walk one up your driveway!
120 posted on 02/27/2002 12:15:09 PM PST by Travis McGee
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