[Vigilanteman]

Excellent. The only verse I'd change is this:

The brave Australians quickly swore they'd join us in the ranks; Yes Canada and Britain said "We'll both stand by the Yanks!"; And the free men of the future shall forever owe them thanks, Let's all go marching on!

Substitute Japan for Canada as their support was quicker and more unconditional.

[Silly]

"Canada" fits better metrically, however.

I like the song.

[proud American in Canada]

This is terrific, AS! thank you for writing it. Vigilianteman, you're right about Canada. People here are grieving with us but they're not as excited about our response. I'm a writer & this weekened I wrote an article about that & submitted it to the paper here--if it gets printed, I'll post it.