To: marktwain
Teen shot, killed in act of self-defense What a pathetic, useless, woke title. Upon reading it a person might get the impression the poor innocent boy died defending himself.
To: LibWhacker
There are plenty of terrible, illiterate writers working these days....Not to mention editors who do NO work...
30 posted on
08/06/2022 5:57:06 AM PDT by
JBW1949
(I'm really PC.....Patriotically Correct)
To: LibWhacker
The article was very poorly written - it never did clearly state who shot the thug...
37 posted on
08/06/2022 6:23:33 AM PDT by
monkeypants
(It's a Republic, if you can keep it.)
To: LibWhacker
That's kind of been my observation for a while now, it seems to me it probably takes more effort to write such vague, confusing, or ambiguous passive voice word salad than it would to simply state the who, what, when, where etc. The reader is then left to try and reverse-engineer the report to figure out what really happened, and that takes even more effort.
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