This just shows how poorly educated she is. Kamel Toe should have had my freshman English prof. He was a Scot and he was frugal. The red pen flowed to cut excess from anything I wrote. Then I had a revelation. I aced a blue book because I had the flu and felt terrible. I walked out of class wondering how I wrote sentences that barely had more words than a noun and a verb. That was perfection to him.
The difficult part, even to today, is practicing that every day.