Ive written for a living for about thirty years in one form or another.
He should have consulted with me. Direct and clear work. Rambling, repetitive and angry make you sound unhinged.
Not even sure why he did it. I get that he is angry, but talking to Pelosi will get him nothing.
About a nice succinct response to your ridiculous defeatist position:
FU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
He says WHY he did it. He wants his feelings known for history.
It may be addressed to Pelosi but he is speaking to the USA.
This isn’t addressed to Pelosi. It is directed to the American people and to the generations that follow.
This is a powerful letter and anything an elite editor or writer would add would merely weaken the message. It is pure Trump.
If the Marxist left could do this to Trump image what they could do to you.
I meant to use the word, imagine.
If the Marxist left could do this to Trump, imagine what they could do to you. Your literary perfeciont would do little to save you.