On Thursday The New York Times published a report noting that Attorney General William Barr would be ‘professionalizing’ the effort against the intelligence community (the deep state’s core element) after POTUS Donald Trump “somewhat clumsily last year to revoke the security clearance of the former C.I.A. director who played a role in opening the Russia investigation.”
You know what else is somewhat clumsy? That sentence. Needs a verb after POTUS Donald Trump. Tried? acted?
There are four or five posts today that are missing crucial elements like that. It seems to be a trend. Maybe it is in the new Stylebooks.