Yes!! Be Afraid, Kingo!! The GOOD people will be INDICTING and IMPRISONING the COUP PLOTTERS and ALL THE OTHER CRIMINAL DEMOCRATS! BE AFRAID!
Give him a break, will ya? That’s his first draft. He puts the first draft in a drawer for 6 weeks and brings it out again to edit (true, said so in his “On Writing” book). Give him another 6 weeks and it’ll be something different.