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To: ForYourChildren

Hey, paid writer Dylan Gwynn, do you get a bonus for every comma or something?

Because there are three in the following exerpt that aren’t needed. Maybe you can recycle them and toss them into your next article. Or mail them to your higher-paid editor:

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“President Trump’s comments in Alabama last Friday night. Where[,] he referred to players who protested the anthem as “SOB’s,” and said he wished their team owners would fire them.

“Those comments[,] led to a backlash from the league last weekend. All told, more than 200 players from all 32 teams protested the president’s comments in some form, or fashion. The Packers stood with interlocking arms[,] in their game against the Bengals.”


69 posted on 09/28/2017 4:22:23 PM PDT by Chad N. Freud (FR is the modern equivalent of the Committees of Correspondence. Let other analogies arise.)
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70 posted on 09/28/2017 4:23:35 PM PDT by Chad N. Freud (FR is the modern equivalent of the Committees of Correspondence. Let other analogies arise.)
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