So much for finishing my second novel. He was supposed to lead a revolution. Had some beautiful passages, too. Back to the drawing board.
Re-imagine Elian as saying this publicly, and behind the scenes he’s plotting to assassinate the current Castro in charge.
“I experienced freedom in America for five minutes before being ripped from liberty’s bosom and returned to the Communist hellhole of my birth...”
Totally works.
I like the idea! Keep writing!