Just damn,
I wish these newbie, fresh from “publik skoolz” could learn how to write.
This is the most agonizingly confused blurb I have ever tried to decipher.
Let me see if I can translate this fartgas:
Perp breaks into house. Perp strangles old girl. Old boy retrieves his weapon, shoots perp. Perp runs out house leaving a PARTING SHOT that injures victim.
Perp goes to the zoo and croaks. Old boy goes to the zoo and gets relieved of his lead poisoning.
Folks, did I get that right?
Sounds like ya did a fine job of translating Liberish