To: TheLawyerFormerlyKnownAsAl
“Authors should not write that way.”
Exactly! Especially when the intro is what readers have been used to receiving from the rag publishing the article!
Lead with the thesis!
51 posted on
09/27/2013 12:41:56 PM PDT by
CSM
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To: CSM
More supportive than Hayes was when on the Fox Panel.
53 posted on
09/27/2013 12:44:51 PM PDT by
gov_bean_ counter
(Romans 1:22 Professing themselves to be wise, they became fools)
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