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To: markomalley

Aside from everything else, it’s very badly written.

6 posted on 09/12/2013 4:48:04 PM PDT by kabumpo (Kabumpo)

To: kabumpo; markomalley

It reads like the twilight fanfic that became “fifty shades of gray.”
Which is to say it is crap.

10 posted on 09/12/2013 5:18:17 PM PDT by Darksheare (Try my coffee, first one's free..... Even robots will kill for it!)

To: kabumpo

Aside from everything else, it’s very badly written.

Indeed it is rather prosaic writing.

17 posted on 09/12/2013 6:23:02 PM PDT by Flick Lives (We're going to be just like the old Soviet Union, but with free cell phones!)

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