By the way, I admire anybody who can write for a living.
——”The reference to running out of white people means that we have to recalculate our campaign so that we garner votes from people of color. “
Well then you most certainly did NOT make that clear at all in your writing. You are a good writer, but even good writers need editorial review.
I provided proper editorial review for you (btw, I write for a living) and if you think your prose actually made a connection between your “running out of white people” comment and the notion that we need to garner votes from people of color, I certainly don’t see it. Again, I suggest you rewrite that paragraph to be more clear.
Perhaps you aren’t a white supremacist, but no shame on me here, nor am I playing the race card on ya, dude. Just trying to help you out.
—”Alan Greenspam? That does “not fly with me” I know your “true character” is that of an anti-Semite. How much more outrageous than your statement is mine?”
Weak. Nice try.
Ending on a good note: Your article was superb on all other counts. I forwarded it to other conservative friends, each of which were wondering what was with that last paragraph.
By the way, I admire anybody who can write for a living.