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To: DH
Just learn how to write and good English. Then the most important thing...the 5 W s. Who, when, where, what, and why.

My jr. high school english teacher would have failed our papers for that.

Two rules: One: Denotative language only; no connotative (loaded) words allowed[*]. Two: who, what, where, and when. There is no "why" because that is interpretive the others are "measurable" data. THAT is why jourbalism sucks nowadays.

I guess I learned SOMEthing in JHS...

[*] Example: Worc. Telegram story about woman despondent at losing home to foreclosure shoots herself "with her husband's hunting rifle." A.P. picks up the story and woman shoots herself "with her husband's high power hunting rifle." A.P.s paper gets a zero.
68 posted on 11/06/2011 4:25:24 AM PST by Peet (Cogito ergo dubito.)
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To: Peet

You are correct.

It’s probably been over 35 years since I noted the 5 ws. I forgot “when” with my mind growing more clouded with age. That’s “WHY.” LoL!


69 posted on 11/06/2011 8:47:09 AM PST by DH (Once the tainted finger of government touches anything the rot begins)
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