I hate to be critical, but whenever I see someone doing overdoing the “I” thing (in business and politics), it just does not give me ‘positive’ vibes. I mean, I agree with pretty much all the positions she has, but it’s the ‘anointing’ of someone as a ‘Leader’ who tends to exhibit this pattern, that I have a problem with.
If not “I” what pronoun would you prefer, since she is writing in the first person?