Trump shouldn't have started the third paragraph with the pronoun "He." Should have said "Obama" instead. That's the first problem that jumped out at me, anyway.
I guess you prefer Bill Ayres to ghost write Trump’s sentences, right?
By the way, I have a theory that Bernadine Dohrn ghost writes Ayre’s stuff, which would make Dohrn the real writer of Dreams of My Father.
I’m also getting the feeling that Trump’s New Yorkiness is getting under freepers’ skin. Freepers have always hated New Yorkers - even when they are doing the Lord’s work - as Trump is doing now.