Good job.
I’m going to offer an opinion you may not like: I don’t think this is a good example of Tea Party activism nor is your post an accurate representation of what happened per the video you posted.
Hate to say it, but you rambled, and you were not in any way surrounded by deputies. Nobody tried to stop you from speaking.
Having said that, we probably agree politically. It just was not well orchestrated in my opinion.
Exclamation points should almost never be used, except in accurate quotations of excited people. Using them in almost every sentence you write makes you seem crazy.