I never said it was a plan. What I said was it could be a place to start a discussion.
What you've laid out is nothing but one more amnesty plan. You allow all the illegals to stay in the US and work legally. Any plan that waives the legally prescribed penalty for the laws broken is an amnesty plan. The law prescribes deportation for illegal entrants.
Denying citizenship to the illegal entrants (but not their descents for as long as the USA exists) accomplishes nothing.