[Mamzelle]

So let them. It doesn't sound like either of them, and they certainly would have caught that awkward sentence discussed by Kansas.

I hear her voice loud and clear.

[Kansas58]

There is an old trick, to DELIBERATELY write or say something wrong, just so it sounds authentic.

More than likely, the one awkward sentence I pointed out was once part of a larger paragraph, and was perfectly find before a previous subject or predicate was edited out of the piece.