[my_pointy_head_is_sharp]

Wordy and unreadable? It was very brief, and written in a conversational style. How much more simple could it get? Are you people not used to reading?

[Ditter]

Yeah, written in a conversational style,like when you are having a conversation with yourself and your thoughts are whirling around in your head. Kinda like that.

[joe fonebone]

I love to read..the problem is not the content, but the writing style...it drifts in and out too many times, making it difficult to read...i agree with the content..

[GOP_Party_Animal]

My prize, in a stunning example of irony, was a year's subscription to New York, which rag (apart from Mary Ann's "Competition") I considered an open running sore on the body of world literacy—this due to the presence in its pages of John Simon, whose stunning amalgam of superciliousness and savagery, over the years, was appreciated by that readership searching for an endorsement of proactive mediocrity.

Do you need another example?