To: what_not2007
It doesn’t help that the article reads as if it were written by a fifth grader.
37 posted on
11/21/2007 12:58:33 PM PST by
Hildy
To: Hildy
To: Hildy
you got a point there. I’ve got a hunch the lot of the folks in this town aren’t very smart or well educated or sophisticated or well-mannered.
43 posted on
11/21/2007 1:01:42 PM PST by
hoe_cake
To: Hildy
You’re right about that.
My main real grammar cringe:
“there’s been numerous complaints” - not a quote, but a narrative.
Never mind the continuity is not very good. I was confused very much in the middle. I stuck it out and read through!
48 posted on
11/21/2007 1:04:24 PM PST by
the OlLine Rebel
(Common sense is an uncommon virtue.)
To: Hildy
It doesn’t help that the article reads as if it were written by a fifth grader. Fifth grader? I was thinking third, at most.
To: Hildy
It doesn’t help that the article reads as if it were written by a fifth grader.You got that right. Most of what passes for journalism is juvenile.
88 posted on
11/21/2007 3:42:05 PM PST by
ovrtaxt
(You're a destiny that God wrapped a body around.)
To: Hildy
It doesn’t help that the article reads as if it were written by a fifth grader. Most 5th graders are clearer and more accurate than most journalists.
107 posted on
11/28/2007 7:59:47 AM PST by
Sloth
(Democrats and GOPers are to government what Jeffrey Dahmer and Michael Jackson are to babysitting)
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