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To: Gabz
You think wrong.........the reference in regard to Dover Downs is for location reference and an indication of what the local police have to deal with this weeked, besides this trajedy.

So the previous sentence mentioning it was a black collage was written for the same reasons? To give location and what the police had to deal with? Why were the two sentences placed in juxtaposition if the author had no intention of connecting the two? He should have started a new paragraph if he was changing the subject to location.

The article linked has changed drastically since my first post. This is not the same article I was posting to.

People know where the track is, they don't necessarily know where DelState is located.

There is a byline to the story and people do know where Dover is. Local landmarks are not necessary. Who cares if it is across the street from the race track or from McDonald's.

83 posted on 09/21/2007 3:50:44 PM PDT by Between the Lines (I am very cognizant of my fallibility, sinfulness, and other limitations.)
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To: Between the Lines
So the previous sentence mentioning it was a black collage was written for the same reasons? To give location and what the police had to deal with? Why were the two sentences placed in juxtaposition if the author had no intention of connecting the two? He should have started a new paragraph if he was changing the subject to location.

Did you ever bother thinking the reporter had nothing to do with the editing of the copy???

The article has changed as the local folk have placed updates --- you got a problem with that? I know I sure don't.

Who cares if it is across the street from the race track or from McDonald's.

Apparently those who wish to make this a racial issue..........

85 posted on 09/21/2007 4:39:29 PM PDT by Gabz (Don't tell my mom I'm a lobbyist, she thinks I'm a piano player in a whorehouse)
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